sherlock holmes in this paper!!

My Paper starting off basically on what i thought on teen pregancies. i basically used my knowledge to write this paper considering couple of my family members were teenage mothers. it was until the group peer review that a friend gave me some important pointers really helped me enhance my paper. for example, i did not know that there could be two sides to teen pregancy. therefore, put forth my sherlock holmes mentality and  got to the bottom it. in the process i also found some very reliable sources. i was already having difficulties chossing a topic that i was really into. i started off with solar power, then dirty cops but in the back of my mind mr.moores words haunted me. he said he would prefer a local issue in the city of  memphis. so after days passed i could not find a topic i was passionate about writing. then i was at walgreens restocking my hershey almond chocolate addiction when i look to my right and there they were. not one but two teenage mothers having a discussion on who will baby sit their children for a club event that was hosting a well known rapper.